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CrimsonInferno
21-10-2007, 03:16 AM
"The Monster"
Written By: Blk Sapphire

Screaming and lurching
Hunching over with no intention
Watching her behind closed doors
Lock and key with glee
So sweet
So tired
So sweet, sweet, sweet
The monster

Nightmare better than dream
Used to the constant
Unaware of the surreal
It's all so very natural now
Watching her behind closed doors
Lock and key with glee
The scream
So bitter
The scream, scream, scream
The monster

Engulfing and devouring
More than tasting but suffocation
All that it is - suffocation
Enduring pain from past experience
Burns cold now
Taking over the sweetness
Watching us behind closed doors
Lock and key with glee
No more
So tired
No more, more, more
The monster

It's everywhere she is
It's anything he is
It's everything we are
Deep in the oblivion of soul
It's everywhere he is
It's anything she is
It's everything they are
The monster knows us all

We.
Are.
It.

haza.haxa
23-10-2007, 11:43 PM
I didnt understand that at all, I am really shallow, I don't understand any poems, except limericks!

baird
25-10-2007, 04:08 PM
its not bad, really mysterious from the beginning, nice ending ^^

CrimsonInferno
31-10-2007, 04:00 AM
Thank you.

moviemadman14
31-10-2007, 06:36 PM
Its an excellet poem.

CrimsonInferno
03-11-2007, 07:05 AM
I think I'm just gonna close this thread... There's no point in coming on here and reading idiocy when all I do is write poetry and at least want some respect for it.

moviemadman14
04-11-2007, 10:19 AM
It Was A Nice Poem

Rasalom
04-11-2007, 03:14 PM
I like it =D