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alexzandra
24-01-2007, 11:08 PM
If it were all up to me
The poor would have riches
And the blind man would see
The hungry would eat
And the weak would be strong
And the people with hatred would all get along
The ones who are greedy would start to share
And unfriendly people would start to care
The tirsty would drink
And the deaf person hear
And sorrow and sadness would all disapper
And that is how the world would be
If it were all up to me.




as written by,

:) Sara Alfano :)

alexzandra
24-01-2007, 11:08 PM
so u like it?

mittenzfibah
26-01-2007, 09:29 PM
so u like it?

i like ur poem, but u made some grammar mistakes...

alexzandra
30-01-2007, 10:26 PM
witch ones??