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salanova_girl91405
19-09-2006, 01:55 AM
Ode to Spock
By Sarah


Dear Mr. Spock, I love you so.
Even though your emotions do not show.
You are a Vulcan; this is true,
But that will not stop me from loving you.

Glossy hair and chocolate-y eyes
Are the things that cause my sighs.
Rich baritone voice and perfect waist,
I wonder how your kisses taste?

Are they soft or are they sweet?
That is why I wish we could meet.
Leila, Zarabeth, and Christine, too
Have also claimed their love for you.

I know logic is your way of life,
But your absence causes me constant strife.
And though I gaze from afar,
You will forever be my logical star.

You died and then came back,
But while you were gone I cracked.
Your death caused me continuous pain.
Please do not make me feel that strain.

When you are with a girl, I feel so hurt,
Until you remove that lovely shirt.
And then I stare so hard I drool.
I am drowning in this love pool.

Oh, Mr. Spock, don’t you see?
How much I need you here with me?
You are in my mind day and night.
We will be together when it is right.

Those other girls were not your type,
Our destiny together is overripe.
Please, Mr. Spock, come my way!
Beam me up and take me away!

You know I love you very much.
Oh, how I long for your touch.
Mr. Spock, you are perfect in every way.
I need your love so badly today.

I am sorry Kirk took you from paradise,
In my opinion, that was not very nice.
My love for you burns eternally,
You will be very contented with me.

Oh, Mr. Spock, please be my lover.
I promise not to act like your mother.
You do not eat meat, but that is no bother,
‘Cause you were raised just like your father.

If you love me, you will find
That I am loyal, honest and kind.
In the meantime, just be my friend.
We will be together till the end.

I have seen what Pon Farr can make you do,
But I will always be there for you.
During Pon Farr, I will give you time.
Your love is worth more than a dime.

Mr. Spock, please hear my voice,
I promise you are making the logical choice.
Listen well and hear my plea,
Telling you to come to me.

Oh, Mr. Spock, give me your love,
It is gentle like a dove.
Mr. Spock, you hold my heart,
And I pray we will never part.

Frost
19-09-2006, 05:31 AM
Ha, that's different.

Though I'm not really a Star Trek fan, I liked this. Pretty unique.

Nicely written; it drove your point home.

[Why did I read that as "Mr. Spook"? o_0]

salanova_girl91405
20-09-2006, 04:07 AM
Here is the next poem...

The Depth of My Love
By Sarah


My heart feels as though it will burst.
For my desire is an unquenchable thirst.
You are emotionless; this is a fact,
Help me to sign this love pact.

Even if you do not feel the same,
I assure you this is not a game.
I am not going to be here forever
Spock, tell me you love me; it’s now or never.

I wait in hope of those three simple words.
Listen and let my plea be heard.
Tell me the truth and set me free.
Accept this piece of logic from me.

My heart burns with eternal affection.
I am the most logical selection.
The depth of my love goes beneath my skin.
This ‘game of love’ is a hard one to win.

Whether you love me or just are my friend,
We will be together till the end.
These feelings are all new to you,
I will love you forever, whatever you do.

Frost
22-09-2006, 03:05 AM
Spock would be flattered. Lol.

Interesting word choices, pretty good flow, and it kept its rhyme scheme.

Tight.

Chimpyguy878
22-09-2006, 04:08 AM
****.
Tremendous
Idiocracy
Trembling
Shippy.

salanova_girl91405
24-09-2006, 06:25 PM
That Fateful Night
By Sarah


I saw you first on that fateful night.
Your heart drew me in; it was love at first sight.
From then until now, I have loved you so much.
All I ask now is one simple touch.

I wait for the day when my fantasies are done.
We will never be alone; we will exist as one.
I am sure that wonderful day is near.
I will be happy while nibbling your pointed ear.

Kiss me and hold me as much as you need.
I will not consider it to be greed.
Please know that while I may cling,
You make me so happy that I could sing.

Let me get back to that first night,
When I realized it was love at first sight.
The prospect of your love is more than alluring.
It makes me content, like a cat that is purring.

Thoughts of you invade my mind,
Causing all other things to be left behind.
The image of you is one I will not soon forget,
It will stay here for some time, and that is my bet.

You look so good in the color black,
I think of that when I hit the sack.
Oh, Spock, I pine for you so,
I love your knowledge and all that you know.

Those brown eyes of yours always pull me in.
Oh, how I long to caress your smooth skin.
Why must we live so far apart?
The distance between us breaks my heart.

I look through my window and out at the sky,
Hear your rich baritone and utter a sigh.
I have another question to ask.
Do you love me underneath that blank mask?

I know you are Vulcan and show no emotion,
But the feelings I have are causing a commotion.
You must think me illogical to cause such a fuss,
I know what I feel; let it stand thus.

If we were together, would you drop your shields?
To love me immensely and let these wounds heal?
Would you smile even when not affected by spores?
I have seen your smile, and it leaves me yearning for more.

Your hair is so shiny; it gleams like the sun.
If you want, I will show you how to have fun…
I long to take your hand into my own.
I love you so much; please let it be known.

The way you betrayed everyone made me cry,
Tears poured down my face as I asked why.
Let it be known that I am madly in love.
You’re my gift from heaven; my miracle from above.

These feelings I have are so very strong.
I hate that we must wait so long.
I pine for the day I will be in your arms,
Kissing your lips and flashing my charms.

I want you so badly I taste it in the air,
I am going to find you; I’ll look everywhere.
When I find you, I wish us to be bonded.
I will not back down until you have responded.

I am not giving up no matter what.
Each time you reject me, it feels like a cut.
Give it all up and face the facts,
Enjoy my presence and all my love acts.

Each time I see you it is never enough,
Our separation is becoming quite rough.
I desire you so badly I want to scream,
I am smitten with you, it would seem.

Your absence is causing me to mope.
Do not lead me on with any false hope.
Love is not logical or sound for that matter.
You are the ball and I am the batter.

I respect your decision, whether good or bad,
Although not loving me will make me sad.
Please know that I do not wish for you to be hurt.
I would love you even if all you did was flirt.

You are a scientist, so do the math.
Pick the one logical path.
Even if you do not see it right away,
We will be together some day.

alexzandra
26-09-2006, 11:52 PM
cool......................

waterdrop64
18-05-2008, 04:08 AM
cool......................

How old are you, Alexzandra? And Salanova girl, I'm a big fan of poetry and writing, you made me like it even more!!!