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morbid
12-12-2008, 07:41 AM
Paint a portrait of my Soul
And you'll find it's only Black and White.
The color faded when you did.

Paint a portrait of my Heart
And you'll find it has no Depth.
It lost its perspective when I lost you.

VioletDazzle305
13-12-2008, 01:47 AM
its very good, i like it.


+1

CrimsonInferno
14-12-2008, 04:55 AM
Different and I like the fact that it's a good different. I didn't mean to rag on your rhyming, but this is a nice change. Wonderful job. I really enjoy the first stanza.