just a litttle poem

[zapgirl94]

A FRIEND:flower:

a friend is someone who...

helps with chores on a bussy day

talks to a crush for you

is always there to cheer you up

helps you up when you fall

a friend is someone who knows you, who is always there
help, a friend is someone just like you.
:wink:

[CrimsonInferno]

Aww...how adorable, but I'm about to hand over some criticism here: that was truly terrible.

Where is the thought process?
Where is the true, honest emotion of friendship?
Where is the difficulty level of vocabulary, grammar and just general English language writing skills?
How did that make you feel?
Why are friends the way they are?

Before you write a poem, please give it much more thought because that was way too simplistic for my liking and it read off like a cheesy elementary poem that you had to write for a class activity in a third grade class.

[Rasalom]

I agree with you there.