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danny
03-05-2008, 02:09 PM
No Love, No Pain

No love, no pain, no game,
its driving me insane,
so smack me with the kane,
and the power i will gain,
to forget all the pain,
but im buiried up in shame,
**** thats lame.
i'd swap all the fame,
if only you came,
ill never forget your name.
without you my life is plain,
boaring and sad,
if it was you i had,
i'd like it, a tad.
ive lived a life in denial,
but only for a while,
when i see you i smile,
and nothing seems vile.
im in a happy place,
where i can see your face.
without the feeling of discrace.
this memory will never erase.
but now that your gone,
i'll have to move on,
resume my life,
and put down the knife.

TwoHeartsAbove
03-05-2008, 02:38 PM
I read it... its good...
I like how you ended it

danny
03-05-2008, 02:47 PM
lol,

thanks

snookid
03-05-2008, 11:57 PM
omg danny and a poem....good good!!!
heye but to be honest the first few lines...."-ame" rhyming sounded like a rap.
but heye good words and a good meaning
i agree with u mildura!
haza follow me!
:P

danny
04-05-2008, 12:14 AM
i was going to write a song then decided to write a poem, but keep the start,
snookid, u da man

snookid
04-05-2008, 12:16 AM
lmao ... don't start it again .... yea i know i'm a man .. umm not really i'm still 19.
neways keep up the good work

danny
04-05-2008, 12:18 AM
i will .

haza.haxa
15-05-2008, 06:47 PM
Why have I not seen this thread before?
Awesome poem Danny! This makes the second poem I read all the way through. This poem made me lol. I'm not entirely sure why though...

danny
16-05-2008, 12:00 AM
the fact of the randomness, lol

MiaHarpefg
21-05-2008, 04:43 AM
without the feeling of discrace.This site is very interesting and it’s good. I like it. Thanks for the info.:weee:



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Windsgottencolder
21-05-2008, 07:47 PM
nice poem and I like how the rhyme would change in certain areas too.