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TwoHeartsAbove
23-04-2008, 06:29 AM
I think about the day, the day that I lost you,

the tears that I had shed from time to time,

our friendship was true, our friendship was strong,

but sadly your time had come,

not even a sign, not even a goodbye,

you had left me here to cry,

the time we had, the time that passed,

i never wanted it to be our last. :heart3:


Written By Me!

snookid
23-04-2008, 10:18 AM
u finished this one too?? great good stuff
well to bad to hear about the incident ... and my google's still not working
:(

Michael_BhB
23-04-2008, 01:40 PM
I wish I could create good poetry im fully jealous! DAMN >.> anyway thats an awesome poem BTW :rofl::rofl::rofl::rofl:

danny
23-04-2008, 04:31 PM
yer .